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And so ends the short yet sweet introduction of Natalia the young Hypno Spy.
As well as the introduction to Officer Mcnutty ^_^

The Dawn/Sarah Triva battle does seem weird rereading but at the time I thought a B Plot might have been needed and this pettiness fit their characters so well and added a few cheap laughs So I'm not complaining. But as far as Dawn knowing about Natalia...that will pay off briefly in a couple of future fics.

Also even though Natalia knows Jake's Captain Anime I think I may have used the greatest reason for a character to not reveal a heroes identity ever....Sheer annoyance over all the other craziness they've experienced :D


Also we get a first look at the fully developed Angel and Kylie. Yay new characters! Who are surprisingly not hypnotists.

Thoughts and feedback are welcome like always.
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lol Loving this. Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if Natalia fell for Jake just out of respect for him having managed to make it through all this. XD